Now, my dad's hungers and thirsts are quite radical, sure It's a vast population wear's the scent of his manure But it seems somewhat judgemental, and also quite crass To compare me dear mum to dad's well plundered ass
Mom's a sweetheart. She IS. Yeah, she likes a good time But having many admirers is really no crime They're merely responding to her unusual allure As they line up from here to Christianne Amanpour...
Your poem made me chuckle, Sub.
ReplyDeleteIt's kinda mean and abusive--I like that!
Form is fascism.
ReplyDeletePoetry that rhymes
sucks.
Of course now Im wondering if there's some fat guy you keep chained to a desk and force to write ALL your poetry.
ReplyDeleteNow, my dad's hungers and thirsts are quite radical, sure
ReplyDeleteIt's a vast population wear's the scent of his manure
But it seems somewhat judgemental, and also quite crass
To compare me dear mum to dad's well plundered ass
Mom's a sweetheart. She IS. Yeah, she likes a good time
ReplyDeleteBut having many admirers is really no crime
They're merely responding to her unusual allure
As they line up from here to Christianne Amanpour...